Improvements

Our feedback consisted of helpful changes we could make to our trailer to make it better. Our teacher's advised us to add an additional scene of the girl in a art gallery, instead of the shots of the girl looking at art colleges on her laptop. Also, we added a scene where the girl is slapping the boy from the trailer to increase tension and sense of 'mania'. Currently we are trying to get some footage of the main girl holding a pregnancy test to broaden the potential stories inside the trailer, therefore making it more appealing and entertaining. Furthermore, we are tidying up clips by stabilizing them on i-movie, making the voice overs fade in more smoothly and editing the colour filters on different clips.